Magnet-Boy 2010-08-19 13:18:48

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Bon-BonFire-Chan 2010-08-20 10:59:48

Tests are a little to slow... what FPS are you using? try 25-32, that well make it faster.
The physics are a little off, the shotgun would have A LOT more recoil, try making it move back to about the middle of the body, and move it up to about where the head meets the body. Also shells fly upwards when they are fired because of the gun recoil. The pistol could have been brought up a little more, but It was being held with 2 hands, so it was good.
also, try to move the hands out a little more, if they were that close to the body, you'd break your hand or arm.

Hopefully this helps!
~TTA~
PS: I'll PM you my sprites.

sebaametalix 2010-08-22 14:06:49

oh mah gah,this is good :D

Crazymonkey154 2010-08-22 16:06:19

I agree with TTA. You need to have more recoil with the DAO-12. And the character should take a step or two back when firing a weapon like a shotgun. And the character should also move back SOMEWHAT when firing a pistol. That needed a little more recoil as well. But overall, very well done!

Crazymonkey154 2010-08-24 15:33:38

brandon31998 responds:

well. the pistol doesn't have a lot of recoil and hes holding it with 2 hands so i disagree with you. but the shotgun did need more recoil.

Oh, I meant that the character should move back somewhat when firing the pistol. And even more so for the DAO-12 (Automatic Shotgun). However, the pistol's rotation is about right, but it should go back more when firing. Apply the same thing (multiplied about 2 or 3 times) for the shotgun, and you'll be good.

Also, you'll be entering 11th grade soon? Me too!

XRoadKillX 2010-08-25 02:03:10

You are improving, however you need to make an original character, man.